Design 2

Design 2

 

 

After doing my first design i when back through my research and discovered a few issues that had to be changed for my newspaper to fit the normal conventions of newspapers.I created a plan of were everything is going to be placed on my front page.

 

  

 

 

The factors that i had changed was the amount of space i used for the new school building story, i reduced the space by not including an articel to go with the picture but puting a jump line there instead. Additionally i have only included on image of the new building instead of two on my first design.

 

I have added in the first paragraph of the knife story to make people aware their has been an unpdate in the old story however because it is going to be an attemted killing from a few months ago it is not important enough to have all the story on the front page.

 

While looking back through my research i discovered that every local newspaper includes adverts of local business promting individuals to use local business rather than national ones.

 

For my main story i am going to use the same tiltle as my first design' shocked student set's the record straight' however it is going to be a more reccent story of a local student comes back from the Olympics with a silver medal. I have arranged the writting for this story to be place over the image due to space issues.